Giving Feedback to a Colleague

Do you have a minute? I wanted to talk about your presentation.

Of course. Was there something wrong with it?

Not at all. The content was excellent and very well researched.

I just felt that some of the slides were a bit crowded.

That's fair. I was trying to include as much detail as possible.

Maybe you could keep the key points on the slides and explain the rest.

That makes sense. I'll simplify them before the client meeting.

Great. Let me know if you'd like me to look at them again.