Giving Feedback to a Colleague

Do you have a minute? I wanted to talk about your presentation.

你有空吗？我想和你聊聊你做的演示。

Of course. Was there something wrong with it?

当然可以。是有什么问题吗？

Not at all. The content was excellent and very well researched.

完全没有。内容非常出色，调研也做得很充分。

I just felt that some of the slides were a bit crowded.

我只是觉得有几页幻灯片有点太挤了。

That's fair. I was trying to include as much detail as possible.

你说得有道理。我当时想尽可能多地包含细节。

Maybe you could keep the key points on the slides and explain the rest.

也许你可以把要点留在幻灯片上，其余的再讲解。

That makes sense. I'll simplify them before the client meeting.

有道理。我会在客户会议之前把它们简化。

Great. Let me know if you'd like me to look at them again.

太好了。如果你想让我再看一遍，告诉我一声。