Giving Feedback to a Colleague

Do you have a minute? I wanted to talk about your presentation.

잠깐 시간 괜찮아요? 발표에 대해 얘기하고 싶었어요.

Of course. Was there something wrong with it?

물론이죠. 뭐 잘못된 거라도 있었나요?

Not at all. The content was excellent and very well researched.

전혀요. 내용이 훌륭했고 조사도 아주 잘 되어 있었어요.

I just felt that some of the slides were a bit crowded.

다만 몇몇 슬라이드가 조금 빽빽하다고 느꼈어요.

That's fair. I was trying to include as much detail as possible.

맞는 말이에요. 가능한 한 자세한 내용을 많이 넣으려고 했거든요.

Maybe you could keep the key points on the slides and explain the rest.

핵심 내용만 슬라이드에 두고 나머지는 설명하면 어떨까요?

That makes sense. I'll simplify them before the client meeting.

일리가 있네요. 고객 미팅 전에 단순하게 고쳐 볼게요.

Great. Let me know if you'd like me to look at them again.

좋아요. 다시 봐 줬으면 하면 말해 주세요.