Giving Feedback to a Colleague

Do you have a minute? I wanted to talk about your presentation.

¿Tienes un minuto? Quería hablar contigo sobre tu presentación.

Of course. Was there something wrong with it?

Claro. ¿Había algún problema con ella?

Not at all. The content was excellent and very well researched.

Para nada. El contenido era excelente y estaba muy bien investigado.

I just felt that some of the slides were a bit crowded.

Solo sentí que algunas diapositivas estaban un poco sobrecargadas.

That's fair. I was trying to include as much detail as possible.

Es justo. Intentaba incluir todos los detalles posibles.

Maybe you could keep the key points on the slides and explain the rest.

Quizá podrías dejar los puntos clave en las diapositivas y explicar el resto.

That makes sense. I'll simplify them before the client meeting.

Tiene sentido. Las simplificaré antes de la reunión con el cliente.

Great. Let me know if you'd like me to look at them again.

Genial. Avísame si quieres que les eche otro vistazo.