Giving Feedback to a Colleague

Do you have a minute? I wanted to talk about your presentation.

Kamu ada waktu sebentar? Aku ingin bicara soal presentasimu.

Of course. Was there something wrong with it?

Tentu. Apa ada yang salah dengan presentasinya?

Not at all. The content was excellent and very well researched.

Sama sekali tidak. Isinya sangat bagus dan risetnya sangat matang.

I just felt that some of the slides were a bit crowded.

Aku hanya merasa beberapa slide agak terlalu penuh.

That's fair. I was trying to include as much detail as possible.

Itu adil. Aku berusaha memasukkan sebanyak mungkin detail.

Maybe you could keep the key points on the slides and explain the rest.

Mungkin kamu bisa menaruh poin-poin utama saja di slide dan menjelaskan sisanya.

That makes sense. I'll simplify them before the client meeting.

Masuk akal. Akan kusederhanakan sebelum rapat dengan klien.

Great. Let me know if you'd like me to look at them again.

Bagus. Kabari aku kalau kamu mau aku melihatnya lagi.