Giving Feedback to a Colleague

Do you have a minute? I wanted to talk about your presentation.

你有空嗎？我想跟你聊聊你的簡報。

Of course. Was there something wrong with it?

當然可以。是有什麼問題嗎？

Not at all. The content was excellent and very well researched.

完全沒有。內容非常出色，研究做得也很紮實。

I just felt that some of the slides were a bit crowded.

我只是覺得有幾張投影片有點太擠了。

That's fair. I was trying to include as much detail as possible.

你說得有道理。我當時想盡可能把細節都放進去。

Maybe you could keep the key points on the slides and explain the rest.

也許你可以把重點留在投影片上，其餘的再說明。

That makes sense. I'll simplify them before the client meeting.

有道理。我會在客戶會議前把它們簡化。

Great. Let me know if you'd like me to look at them again.

太好了。如果你想請我再看一次，跟我說一聲。