Discussing a Seminar Presentation

Overall, I thought your presentation on renewable energy was very clear.

整體來說，我覺得你關於再生能源的簡報非常清楚。

Thank you. I was worried that I'd included too many statistics.

謝謝。我之前擔心自己放了太多統計數據。

The numbers were useful, but some of the charts were hard to read.

這些數字很有用，但有些圖表很難閱讀。

Should I have used fewer colours?

我是不是應該少用一些顏色？

Yes, and larger labels would make a big difference.

是的，而且標籤再大一點會有很大的改善。

Your conclusion was strong, but you could have linked it back to your question.

你的結論很有力，但本來可以把它連結回你的問題。

That's helpful. I'll keep that in mind for the final essay.

這很有幫助。我會在期末論文中記住這一點。

Good. Remember that the essay should be around three thousand words.

好。記得這篇論文大約要三千個單字。