Discussing a Seminar Presentation

Overall, I thought your presentation on renewable energy was very clear.

总体来说，我觉得你关于可再生能源的演讲非常清晰。

Thank you. I was worried that I'd included too many statistics.

谢谢。我之前担心自己放了太多统计数据。

The numbers were useful, but some of the charts were hard to read.

这些数字很有用，但有些图表很难看清。

Should I have used fewer colours?

我是不是应该少用一些颜色？

Yes, and larger labels would make a big difference.

是的，而且标签再大一些会有很大的改善。

Your conclusion was strong, but you could have linked it back to your question.

你的结论很有力，但本可以把它和你提出的问题联系起来。

That's helpful. I'll keep that in mind for the final essay.

这很有帮助。我会在期末论文里记住这一点。

Good. Remember that the essay should be around three thousand words.

好。记住论文应该在三千词左右。